first draft double page spread...

After working on my first draft and recieving constructive critiscm for it, I have decided to make a few changes. Such as, I am going to make sure the black box doesnt not split the page half and half as it makes the page look to seperate, I have also decided to icnlude more of the polaroid styled photos crossing over onto the other halfof the page, to give at a more comlpete look.

First draft contents page...

This is my first detailed draft of my contents page, after peer feedback I have decided to include more images at the bottom of the page, to create a more full look.

Second draft front cover...

This is my second draft front cover for my music magazine. Shortly after completing this I decided that the font for "The girl behind the lyreics" did not match the style of my magazine as well as this the title did not link to the double page spread or give any information on what the article will be about.
I have also decided to include some more sub stories.